第三届《才子》杯参赛作品186号 文敏散文三篇

           

华人、华语,中国作家讲中国故事

第三届《才子》杯参赛作品186号

文敏散文三篇

严师慈父

JIAXIANGWEIYUHENANSHENGZHONGBUPIANNAN,YINXIANGLIGUAGUOTAOLISIJIPIAOXIANG,CHUNZHONGQIUSHOUYUXIANWAFEI,SHENGHUOSUISUANBUSHANGFUYU,DANYEKUAILEZIZU。

5SUINEINIANFEIYAONAOZHESHANGXUE,XIANZAIXIANGXIANGYEBUSHIYINWEIDUOMEXIHUANDUSHU,JIUSHIHEJIABAOYUYIYANG,XIHUANXUEXIAODERENAOBALE。FUQINTINGSHUOWOXIANGSHANGXUE,ZIRANSHIFENGAOXING,QISHIZIXIKANKANWODEMINGZI,JIUZHIDAOJIAFUDUOMEKEWANGWONENGCHENGWEIYIWEIYOUXUEWENDEDUSHURENLE!NIANGYEHUANXIDELIANYEWEIWOFENGLEYIGEZHANXINDEHUASHUBAO,BAOMINGDENEITIANZAOSHANG,XINGGAOCAILIEDEGENZAIFUQINSHENHOUPAODAOXUEXIAO,DANSHILAOSHIYINWEIWONIANLINGTAIXIAOJIANJUEBUSHOU,PAWOXUEXICHENGJIGENBUSHANG。FUQINZHIHAODAIZHEWOWANGHUIZOU,WOQUESIHUOBUYI,AOBUGUOHOUZUOZAIJIEKOUSHICHANGZAISHANGMIANWANSHUADEDANIANPANSHANGKUNAOLEYICHANGCAIBUDEBUSHOUBINGHUIJIA。

对战牛牛HAOBURONGYIAODAO6SUI,FUQINYOUZHENGZHONGQISHIDIBAWODAIDAOXUEXIAO,ZHEICILAOSHIZONGSUANMEISHUOSHENMEBAWOSHOUXIALE。DEFUMUZHENCHUAN,XUEXICHENGJIZIRANBUHUICHA,DANSHIBUZHIDAOHEYIN,ZIXIEDEZONGSHIYOUXIECAOSHANGFEI,MAOBIZIBUYONGSHUOLE,WOMENNEISHIYIJINGHENSHAOLIANLE,XIAOKAI、ZHONGKAIYESHIRUCI。CONGXIAOXUEYINIANJIDAOSANNIANJIDEBANZHURENDOUSHIBENJIASHENSHEN,YOUYICIBUZHIDAOSHIWODEZIXIEDESHIZAIBUNENGKAN,HAISHITAZIJIYOUSHENMEBUSHUNXINDESHI,DANGZHEWOHETONGXUEDEMIANBAWODANGTIANDEXIAOKAISIDIAO,ERQIEFENNUDEDUIWOSHUO:NAHUIJIAZHONGCHAO!XIAOXIAODEWOZIZUNBEIDADASHANGHAILE,BEIQISHUBAOYILUKUZHEHUIJIA,FUQINYIKANJIANWOBIANWEN:ZENMELE,KUCHENGZHEIYANG?

对战牛牛QISHIZICONGWOKAISHIDAOXUEXIAODUSHU,XUEXICHENGJIYIZHIHENHAO,TONGXUEXIANMU、LAOSHIKUAJIANG、FUMUZIRANYEJUEDEYANMIANYOUGUANG,ZAIJIASHANGZIJIYOUDIANXIAOXIAODEYAOQIANG,JISHIZAIWAIMIANSHOUDIANXIAOWEIQUYEBUHUIHUIJIAKUSU,NEITIANDEZHENZHANGRANGFUQINJUEDEHENYIWAI。TINGWANWODEKUSU,FUQINMINGBAISHIYINWEIZIXIEDEBUHAOBEISHENZIDANGZHETONGXUEMIANERSILE,CAIBUYIWEIRANDESHUO:WODANGSHISHADABULEDESHIERNI,WOMENXIAOSHIHOUDUSHUSHI,XIANSHENGSHOULIZONGNABAJIECHI,YIGEZOUSHENJIECHIJIUHUIDADAOSHENSHANG。GANGKAISHILIANMAOBIZISHIZONGXIEBUHAO,JINGCHANGBEIXIANSHENGFA,XIECUOLEZIJIUDESHENCHUZUOSHOU,RANGXIANSHENGYONGJIECHIZHONGZHONGDEDA,SHOUJINGCHANGBEIDAZHONGLEHAIDEJIXUXIE,ERQIEHAIBUNENGKU,WOMENDEZIJIUSHIZHEIYANGLIANCHULAIDE。NIYEBIEKULE,ZAIQUMAIGEBENZIZHONGXINCHAOXIE。

对战牛牛CONGNEIYIHOU,XUEXIAOLIWULUNSHOULESHENMEWEIQUDOUBUZAIHUIJIAKUSU。YINWEIWOZHIDAOLEFUMUDEWEIQU,HEZHISHIYIGEXIAOXIAODEYANMIANSAODI;LAOSHIDEYANKEYEJINJINSHIWEILEWOMENJIANGLAINENGBITAGENGYOUCHUXI;WOYEKAISHIJIANJIANDONGDE,“SHANGXUE”BUJINJINSHIWEILERENAO、HAOWANHEYANMIAN。ZHIDAOJINTIAN,ZISUIXIEDEYIRANMEIYOUTAIDAJINGJIN,DANSHIDUSHUQUECHENGLEFENGCHUIYUNSAN,SHUIDISHICHUAN,BANSUIWOZOUCHUJIAXIANGNITUDEJIBAN,ZOUCHUSHENGMINGKANKANKEKELICHENGDEYIGUAN。

对战牛牛GENGZHIDEYISHUDESHI,SUIYIGUOLEZHITIANMINGZHINIANRENGNENGJIANCHICHUXINBUGAI,PINGCHUANGTINGYUNZHIYU,SHANGNENGSIXUESHENDU,SUISANYANLIANGYU,SHUQINGDAYI,LIAOWEIFUMUCIMING“SHUZHAI”ZHIXIJI,BAODAENSHIYANKEZHIQIWANG,FUWEICENGCENGJIAODIEDEANJUANLIPIAOBAIDEYILVHUAFA。SUILAOJIFULI,RENGZHUANGXINBUYI!

戏剧人生

对战牛牛“BEIJUSHIBAYOUJIAZHIDEDONGXIHUIMIEJIRENKAN,XIJUSHIJIANGWUJIAZHIDEDONGXISIPOJIRENKAN。”

对战牛牛                             —— LUXUN

YIBIANHUIWANG,YIBIANXINGZOU,YIBIANJILUYIJINGCHENGLEYIZHONGSHENGHUOXIGUAN。DANSHIDAOHANGZHOUXIXISHIDISHIQUNIANGUOQINGJIE,YINWEIZHONGZHONGYUANYINYIZHIBEIGEZHIZHE,DANSHIYEYIZHIZAINEIXINYUNNIANGZHE,JINGGUOYIGEQIUDONGDEZHEFU,ZHONGYUYINGLAILECHUNNUANHUAKAIDEJIJIE,XINZHONGCHUZANGDEGEZHONGXINXUYEKAISHICAOZHANGYINGFEI,BUGANJIMOQILAI。

YINWEISHIJIANHAISHIYOUDIANERCANGCU,BENWUJIHUAGUOQINGQIJIANDAOHANGZHOU,DANSHIYIGESHIJIANCHAQIAHAONENGHEMEIMEIJIANSHANGYIMIAN,WEILELEQUEDUORIWEICENGHEMEIMEIMOUMIANDEQIANGUA,YEJIUMEIYOUZUOTAIDUODEKAOLVHEZHUNBEI,JIUZHIBENHANGZHOUXIXISHIDILE。XIXISHIDIDEMEILIZIBUBIGUODUOMIAOSHU,WODAODESHIHOUZHENGSHISHIZIHONGTOUDEJIJIE,MANYUANGUIHUAPIAOXIANGGENGSHIQINRENXINPI。SHOUDISHIXIXISANDIZHONGZUIZHANGDEYITIAO,QUANZHANGYUE3600MI,YOUNANZHIBEI“ZHIXUE、ERLI、BUHUO、ZHITIANMING、ERSHUN、CONGXIN”LIUZUOQIAOGUANCHUANQIZHONG。LIANGANZONGHENGJIAOCUODESHUIYU,BAINIANDESHUMUMATOU,XINGCHENGZIRANTIANCHENGDESHENGTAIJINGSE。CHEXINGDISHANG,KEJIANQUNSHANDIECUI,SHANYINGYUHEGANGYAOXIANGHUYING,LINGRENXINKUANGSHENYI。  

YINWEIFUQINDEYUANGUBA,WOMENJIEMEIDUIXIQUHEXIQURENSHENGYOUZHEGENGJIANONGHOUDEXINGQU,SUOYIMEIMEITEYIDAIWODAOHONGYUANZHUANZHUAN,LINGLVEYIXIAHONGFUDEYUYUN。HONGYUANSHIMINGDAISHANGSHUHONGZHONGWANNIANGUIYINDEDIFANG,WANNIANDEHONGZHONGZAIXIXIZHUSHULOU、KEZIDI、CHANGWENFENG,XIANSHIYULAONONGCUNWENGYANJIUQINGYU、HUASANGMA,YIRANZILE,CHENGWEILEXIXIYINYIWENHUADETUCHUDAIBIAO。DANSHIDUIYUHONGSHI,ZHIQIANWOSUOLEJIEDEJIUZHIYOUQINGCHAODEHONGSHENGHETADEJUZHU《ZHANGSHENGDIAN》,SUOXINGHONGYUANNEIYOUQUDEZHANGLANG,YITONGDIAOLIANHUANHUADEXINGSHIJIANG《ZHANGSHENGDIAN》JUBENZHANXIANDELINLIJINZHI,TANGMINGHUANGLILONGJIYUGONGNVYANGYUHUANDEAIQINGGUSHITUWENBINGMAO,NENGRANGYOUKEZHENQIEDEGANSHOUDAOXIQU《ZHANGSHENGDIAN》DEDUTEYUNWEI。

然而洪昇的故事却令人唏嘘,无法用一种价值观、人生观表达清楚。洪昇在清顺治二年七月初一(公元1645年8月21日)出生时,全家正在逃难之中,满月后才回到城里。洪姓虽是钱塘的望族,世代书香,他也接受了正统的儒家教育,学习勤奋,很早就显露才华,15岁即闻名于作者之林,20岁时已创作了许多诗文词曲受人称赞。但是四年后,赴北京国子监肄业。因未得官职,失望而归。为了衣食而到处奔波。27岁前后,遭“天伦之变”的家难,为父母所不容,被迫离家别居,贫至断炊。之后变故依然源源不断,直到(公元1688年),他把旧作《舞霓裳》传奇戏曲改写为《长生殿》,传唱甚盛。时值孝懿皇后佟氏病逝,犹未除服,被事中黄六鸿以国恤张乐为“大不敬”之罪名,上章弹劾,洪昇下刑部狱,被国子监除名。时人有“可怜一夜《长生殿》,断送功名到白头”之句。

对战牛牛HONGSHENGDEYISHENG,CHULEDUIXIJUYISHUDEZHIZHEZHUIQIUZHIWAISIWUGENGDUOKEQUANKEDIANZHICHU,WOYEWUXINJIANGTADEBEIJURENSHENGSISUILEZHONGXINZHANXIAN。ZHIXIANGSHUO,QIANNIANZHIHOU,HAINENGYOUYIFANGWUTAIZAIZUONIANCHANGDAZHONGYUTAGONGTONGYANYIDIWANGDEXIJURENSHENG,LINGLVEJIANGSHANDUOJIAO,SHIDAIYONGFANG,ZHEIBENSHENJIUSHIHOURENWEITAXUXIEDEYIBUCHUANQIBA。

“RENWEISHENMEYAOKANBEIJU?”YINWEIRENSHENGCONGLAIDOUBUSHIXIJU!SHIFEIDUICUO,ZIBUBIYANSHUO,QIEKANHUALUOHUAKAI。

洛阳城视.老城

对战牛牛ZUOWEIYIGEBUSUANDIDAODELUOYANGREN,LAOCHENGQINGJIEQUEYIZHIHUIZHIBUQU,JIHUMEIZHOUYITANG。

GUDOULUOYANGZUOWEIZHONGHUAWENHUADEYAOLAN,ZIYOUTADEDUTEMEILI。ZAIGONGYUANQIAN21SHIJI,JIUYUNYULEZHONGGUOLISHISHANGDIYIGEGUOJIA——XIA!ZHIGONGYUANSHISHIJI,XIA、SHANG、XIZHOU、DONGZHOU、DONGHAN、CAOWEI、XIJIN、BEIWEI、SUI、TANG、HOULIANG、HOUTANG、HOUJINDENG13GECHAODAIJUNXIANHOUJIANDOUYUCI,LISHISHANGCHENGWANG、CHENGDIZHEDA104RENZHIDUO。

ZUORIDELAOCHENGZHIXINGSHIBEI“LUOYIGUCHENG”XIYIN,QUEYINLINSHIBIGUANBUDEBURAODAODONGDAJIE,SUOYIZHONGGULOUSHIBUDEBUSHUODELAOCHENGJINGDIANHUATI。LUOYANGLAOCHENGGULOU,ZHENGMING“QIAOLOU”,JUJINYIYOU350NIANDELISHI,JINGGUOSHUCIXIUSHAN,XIANZAIYIZHONGXIANXIRIFENGCAI。RANERRANGWOZHIBUZHUFUXIANGLIANPIANDE,QUESHIDONGXILIANGBIAN“JIURI”、“ZHANYUN”BIANE:ZHONGGULOUSHANGHUIXIANGDEBUJINJINSHICHENZHONGMUGU,DUOSHAOWENRENMOKEZAIZHEILIJIUZHERIYUEFANGHUA,ZHANYANGYANYUFANGHUA?NEIGAISHIZENYANGYIZHONGFENGQING,XINZHONGYONGDONGDEYOUGAISHIZENYANGDECAISI?

对战牛牛WOZAIXINGFULIDENGNI。KANDAOZHEIJIGEZIXINZHONGBUMIANYONGXIANQIYIZHENZHENWENWAN,SHIJINGXIAOYUAN,YEXUBUSHI“MANCHENGCHUNSEGONGQIANGLIU”,YEXUBUSHI“SHANGUZHONGCHUNZHENGDANGSHI”;DANSHIZHISHENQIZHONG,NIYIDINGNENGGANSHOUDAODUOSHAOSUIYUEYANYUZHONG,XUNCHANGBAIXING,HUOSESHENGXIANGFANHUACHU。

对战牛牛DANGRAN,SHIZIJIESHICHIHUOMENBUNENGBUQUDEDIFANG。SHUIXI、YANCAI、BUFANTANG......DOUZANQIEBUSHUO,DANDANKANDAOZHEIYIJIAFUQIDANGLUOYOUMODEQINGJING,JIURANGRENRENBUZHUYEZOUBUDONGLE,TONGNIANDEJIYISHUNJIANFUXIANZAINAOHAI。XIAOSHIHOU,JIALICHANGCHANGSHIMUQINHEMIANLUOMO,NAINAISHAOAOZI,WOJIUANJINGDEZUOZAIYIBIAN,JIALISUIRANBUFUYU,DANSHIFENGNIANGUOJIELUOYOUMOGAISHANSHENGHUOHAISHICHANGYOUDE。DANGAOZISHANGDEDAYOUBANZHECONGHUADEXIANGWEIMANWUYINYUNSHI,WOBIANKAISHILIANGYANZHIDENGDENGDEDINGZHEAOZISHANGGANGGANGTIAOXIADEYOUMO,KOUSHUIYEKAISHIZAIZUILIBUTINGDIGULUGULUDAZHUAN。KANWOSHIZAICHANDEBUXINGSHI,NAINAIHUICHENREJIWOBAIYIKUAIER,ZUILIBIANJUJIAOZHEXIANGTIANDEYOUMO,XINLINEIFENXIANGTIANDEXINGFUYEJIUWUFAYONGYUYANXINGRONGLE。

SUIRANYINWEILUOYIGUCHENGLINSHIBIYUANMEINENGJINYUANCANGUAN,DANSHIGUCHENGWENHUAQUEBUNENGBUZHIDAO。“LUOYI”NAILUOYANGZHIJIUCHENG,YOUGUZHIJINJIUSHIHUAXIAWENMINGDEDAIBIAO。YUANQUNEIYOUWENFENGTA、WENMIAO、TUOLINGGONG、SIYANJINGDENGBAOHUYIZHI,BUJINCHUANTONGWENHUADIYUNSHENHOU,ERQIEXIANDAIQIXINONGYU。

对战牛牛ZOUWANYIQUAN,WOBUZHIDAOGAIYONGLIUYUXIDE“CHENGZHONGTAOLIXUYUJIN,ZHENGSICHUILIUWUJINSHI”BIAODA;HAISHIYONGLIBAIDE“SHEIJIAYUDIANFEISHENG,SANRUCHUNFENGMANLUOCHENG;CIYEQUZHONGWENZHELIU,HERENBUQIGUYUANQING?”LAIBIAODA。

ZONGZHI,LUOYANGDELAOCHENGZONGNENGRANGRENCHANSHENGXUXUDUODUODECHANGXIANGHEHUIWEI。QIUTIANDAOLE,CHULEZUIZAIHONGYEQIUFENGZHONG,YEGAIZAIHUILAOCHENGKANKANLE,CHULEMIBUYIXIAMEIYOUCANGUANDAOLUOYIGUCHENGDEYIHANWAI,ZHEILIYINGGAIHAIYOULINGYIFANXUANMUDEFENGGUANGBA。

ZUOZHEJINZHAO

作者简介:本名:路书斋 笔名:文敏 。洛阳市作协会员,洛阳市散文诗学会副会长,《作家前线》系列公众平台签约作家,国家二级心理咨询师。

BENQIBIANJI:YIMING

《ZUOJIAQIANXIAN》YIKANDAOBAKANGONGYONGTOUGAOYOUXIANG:

对战牛牛SHIWENWENXUEJIANGHU  SHEINENGHENGDAOLIMA

第三届《才子》杯全国文学作品大赛启动

MIANXIANGQUANGUOZHENGGAO

WEIHUOYUEWENXUECHUANGZUO,《ZUOJIAQIANXIAN》YIKANZHIBAKANLIANSHOUJUBANDISANJIE《CAIZI》BEIQUANGUOWENXUEZUOPINDASAI,XIANMIANXIANGQUANGUOZHENGGAO。

对战牛牛SANWEN、SHIGE、XIAOSHUODENGYIQIEWENXUEZUOPINJIEKE,SANWENBUCHAOGUOWUQIANZI,SHIGEBAOKUOGUTISHIKEYIZU,XIAOSHUOYIWANZINEI,QITAWENTIYIWANZINEI。

ZHEICIBISAICONG2YUE16RIKAISHI,JIANGZAI5YUE19RIJIEGAO,LISHISANGEYUE。

对战牛牛CANSAIZUOPINJIANGZAI《ZUOJIAQIANXIAN》YIKANDAOBAKANKANCHU,DASAIBUSHOUQURENHEFEIYONG,CANSAIZUOPINDASHANGDASAIJIESHUHOUANCHANGGUIFAFANG。SUOYOUCANSAIZUOPINTONGYANGDUIDAI。

TOUGAOZHIJIESHOULUOGAO,BUJIESHOURENHELIANJIE。LAIGAOWENHOUYAOYOUZUOZHEJIANJIEHEWEIXINLIANXIFANGSHI,ZUIHAONENGPEIZHANGZUOZHESHENGHUOZHAO。TUPIANQINGYONGFUJIANFASONG。

《CAIZI》BEIWENXUEZUOPINDASAIZUGAOZHUBIANLIXINGANG

对战牛牛《ZUOJIAQIANXIAN》ZHIKANZHENGGAOTONGZHI

《ZUOJIAQIANXIAN》ZHIKAN2019DIYIQIXIANMIANXIANGQUANGUOZHENGGAO。

  SANWEN、SHIGE、XIAOSHUODENGYIQIEWENXUEZUOPINJIEKE,SANWENBUCHAOGUOSANQIANZI,SHIGEBAOKUOGUTISHI,XIAOSHUOYIWANZINEI,QITAWENTIYIWANZINEI。

GAOZIGUOSHENHOU,XUZUOZHEANZHAOSUOZHANYEMIAN,MEIYEGOUSHUWUCE。BAOYOU。

目前已入围作品目录

(排名按照参赛时间顺序)

021号    散文:   程喜林散文一组     程喜林

023号    散文:   我对母亲的思念     邢雷声

025号    散文:   汪云海散文一组     汪云海

027号    散文:   牙齿之间           伍砾飞

035号    诗歌:   回家(外一首)     唐江

039号    散文:   流年禅韵           武世昌

049号    诗歌:   假如春天是一个新娘(外一首)吕永刚

055号    散文:   那片摇曳多姿的油菜花 胡杨

057号    散文:   嫂妹             鲍富荣

062号    散文:   再教育之歌          贾翠芝

077号     小说:    雨地              苏寒

078号     散文:    细雨年轮            村子

080号     散文:    水远山遥,乡愁何寄        高怀忠

002号     诗文:    沁园春八首          绿草地

151号     散文:    上原挖野菜          江风秦雨

149号     散文:    小偷       李景

165号     散文:    邢雷声散文两篇       邢雷声

135号     诗文:    南锦锋诗五首        南锦锋

158号     诗词:    丹凤词两首       丹凤

072号     散文:    五弟走了        村子

176号     诗歌:    薄刀梁子       木弓

121号     散文:    做人如水       徐青

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